This year Melbourne, a city founded in 1835, rated perfect
scores for healthcare, education and infrastructure in the latest Economist
Intelligence Unit (EIU) livability survey, helping it maintain the title of the
world’s most livable city for the second year running. However, is the
Melbourne now more livable than during pre-settlement? Some people would
definitely say that now is better, others would disagree. In my opinion, there
is no exact response to this. You would have to consider many different
factors, and yet there is no yes or no answer.
Firstly, what does livable mean. According to the Galileo
Wiki, livability is
the sum of the aspects that add up to the quality of life of a place, including
its economy, facilities and services, environmental sustainability, health and
wellbeing, equity, education and learning and government. Since the mid
1830’s, when the first Europeans ‘founded’ our great city, much change has
occurred and many of these changes make up what Melbourne is today. No one can
deny that the technology nowadays is much more advanced. Electricity has been
invented. Television, computers and phones have also become part of our daily
lives. Now we are able to do things, which would have been tedious and long
during the early settlement period, a lot faster. For example, one of the
methods that was used in the past is described very clearly by Richard A. Gould
in his book "Yiwara: Foragers of the Australian Desert",
ISBN684-71787-5, published in 1960 by Charles Scribner's Sons. It explains how
time-consuming and tiring it was. Now, you can light a fire with just the flick
of a hand.
However, though short cuts may sometimes be good, this has
made people become lazier. Where the aboriginals walked the lands around 200+
years ago, there are now roads which people drive cars on. Though it may be a
faster means or travel, it has caused pollution, global warming… Before
European settlement, the indigenous people hunted, celebrated rituals… (learnt
from the Koorie Heritage Trail) for leisure. Nowadays up to 70.5% of
Australians watched t.v. at home on an average day, watching an average of 143
minutes per day. These statistics stress that people have now become lazier.
Before European settlement, Melbourne had already been
settled for 31,000 to 40,000 years by the Wuthaurong, Wurundjeri and
Boonwurrung people of the indigenous tribes. On our trail this week, I got the
opportunity to gain insight into what life was like before, in the eyes of
these indigenous people. Donna, our guide from the Koorie Heritage Trust, told
us that, even though technology had not developed a great deal, it was pretty
much peaceful. The tribes were close knit communities, excluding a few clashes,
and the land was undisturbed. People could hunt for fish in the wetlands and
gain access to clean water from the Yarra River. Most would be immune to the
diseases that were already there and there would rarely be an outbreak of new
diseases. Before European settlement, the Indigenous people were happy with
their lives and didn’t expect anything better. But as a flock of new immigrants
took over the land in 1835, most of this changed. Melbourne became populated
with not only foreigners, but their flora and fauna as well. The numbers soared
up to hundreds of thousands. Soon, the crime rate rose, pollution became
more crucial and global warming. Unknown illnesses broke out and with the blink
of an eye, 80% of the indigenous population were gone. Now Melbourne, and the
world, is polluted, is being affected by global warming and poverty is occurring
in many parts of the world. These are just a few of the problems we face today.
On the other hand, you could argue that there were fewer outbreaks
of sicknesses because the population back there was significantly less than
now. If there were a higher number of aboriginal people, there might have more
diseases. Melbourne is facing global warming, poverty and many other problems,
but we are still trying to bring to an end to these disasters. Furthermore,
many different facilities have appeared for our leisures that definitely would
have existed in the pre-settlement period. There are stadiums for sport,
medical centers that provide more advanced medicines than before and gyms where people can 'work out'.
As for education, I am actually leaning towards the past. In the past, the aboriginals passed on their history by orally speaking to them. The children were taught how to hunt, fish and which plants were edible. They taught the next generation things that they actually needed to know! Now, we are taught maths, geography, history... many of which we aren't necessarily going to use in our futures. Comparing the two education 'systems', The earlier one stands out to be more efficient and useful than the latter.
Therefore, after taking into consideration the different parts there are that decide whether a city is livable and comparing them two periods, I still cannot say which was the
better time era to live in Melbourne. To me, it really depends who
you are, what you prefer, and how high/low your expectations are. I enjoy living in
Melbourne in this time period; there are many more facilities available and the technology has evolved (which is what I'd prefer). However, I wouldn't mind living in the past and embracing the many difficulties and simplicities that come my way.
Galileo trails
Myself :)
Woah, I didn't realise that it would be this long. :O
ReplyDeleteHi Thao-My,
ReplyDeleteFantastic response. You ave clearly done research and given thought to many different aspects of what constitutes liveability.
You have begun to think critically about your evidence by questioning the population differences between then and now when discussing diseases. This demonstrates that you are going beyond simplistic understandings of the evidence you find. Well done.
I would like to see you incorporate more evidence from Galileo, perhaps the North Melbourne trail?
Keep it up,
Carly
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Hi Carly,
DeleteYAYAYAYAY!!! I GOT 90%!!!! YAYAYA TTTHHHAAANNNKKK YYYOOOUUU!!!!
Thao-My :)
Hi Thao-My
ReplyDeleteUm I didn't know if I was supposed to reply on my blog or yours so I'll just reply on yours cos its more convenient. Thanks for the feedback, but I don't think it was as good as you commented. Yeah, the time span for the past wasn't really clear, it was basically more like anytime before the 21st century.
Your essay's pretty good. Well constructed, really detailed and clarified, and has heaps of evidence. And holy man your resources are laid out so detailed. There's nothing much to comment on. Maybe not using ... or maybe that's too formal but.
Nice essay, as usual :)
Sarah
Hey Sarah,
DeletePhew. I thought that my comment got cancelled or something 'cause when I checked your blog again, I didn't see it. Then I commented on it again adn it said 'wait moderator's approval' (?) or something. Maybe you have to 'approve' of it???? Yeah, and I think you were supposed to comment on my comment on yours?? I don't know.
Anyway, thanks for the complement, and yeah.. I do write kind of formal... a little bit too much, but I've always written essay like this, so it's a hard habit to get rid of :P. And what's with the as usual part? My essays are hardly well written. But thanks :)
Thao-My